DA 2

DISCOURSE ASSIGNMENT 2

Name : novitasari wahyu mukti wulandari

Class : E

NIM  : A. 3200 90 170

Here are the data of cohesion found on DA assignment:

Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti

1. An article in Campus magazine entitled "Publics Participation for Education" by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first  school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara
2. Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to fulfil the spirit of education these days. 
3. Citizens should get competent education. 
4. Education is responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and group. 
5. Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools.
6. Supported by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its education.
7. Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house models). It is classified into two models
8. First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can stay and study freely.
9. First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can stay and study freely. They study about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public.
10. Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students
11. Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students. They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art.
12. Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students. They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art.
13. Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students. They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art.  They are prepared to face the era thatalways changes.
14. To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children
15. To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children
16. Government and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of education.
17. Citizens should get competent education. Education is responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and group.
18. The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education
19. The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. I think that this statement is true.
20. Education is responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and group
21. Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools.
22. Without already realized the friction that could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of existing education
23. To get good education with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children 
24. Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools.
25. Supported by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its education.
26. Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students
27. He says that the education not only managed by government, but also the society has contribution to build education together, about how they create good education, both the facilities, system and soon

Analisis :

1.      . Reference cohesion

 Data number (6,7,8,9,10,11,13,14,15,16,18)

v  for example in no 5 there is "it" that refers to the private sector individual school it included in cataphoric.

v  In 9,11,13, "they" refer to the students who study to the students who study to the pesantren. it concluded in cataphoric.

v  Their and they in no.14 refers to the managers of the pesantren. it concluded cataphoric

1.      Lexical cohesion: metonymy: (12) 

v  In number 12the word "other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art." is lexical Lexical cohesion. it conclude in Metonym

2.       Lexical cohesion: repetition: (17)

v  In number 17 the word "education." is lexical Lexical cohesion. it conclude in Metonym 

3.       Substitution: (14)

v  In number 1 and 2 “an article” replace of “Publics Participation For Education” and “education paradigm” replace “Indonesia”   it is called substitution of noun

4.       Conjunction: (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27)

v  in the text mentioned "and" which indicates/shows the relation of the main clause and main clause, so it can called paratactic conjunction

v  in the text mentioned "because of " is hypotactic conjunction.